For those of you who have been following my progress in the smories.com competition with my picture book entry ‘Can You Jump Like a Kangaroo‘ I have some good news to share. The competition ended two days ago and my story came in third! It may not have been first, but I was still extremely happy to win a place. Now I am preparing to query the story to publishers.
Writing a Picture Book Query: The Dilemma
I frequent quite a few agent and writing blogs and have collected a plethora of information on querying, however now I am faced with writing a query for a picture book I’ve found all my previous research on queries, which has primarily focused on querying novels, is not quite adequate for writing a PB query. I sat at my computer with a word document open, typed the initial salutation and then stopped. I know how to condense a 50k + word novel into a paragraph, I’ve written and rewritten queries for my YA novel many times over, but how do I write a paragraph summary of a picture book that’s only 147 words?
Sourcing Blogs for Query Writing Tips
I checked out a few picture book queries kidlit agent Mary Kole had commented upon on her blog during a query competition she held a while back to get some ideas (she has since removed these posts, but she has another post on picture book queries here, which I’ve also linked below). Through looking at these examples with comments from an agent who specialises in kidlit I was able to gain some insight into how a pictures book plot can be written in a query letter. I discovered channeling the voice of the book was a good first step. I wrote out my query with a better idea on how I could approach describing the story, but I still wasn’t sure if I was hitting the mark.
Seeking the Opinions of Those Who Have Written Successful Queries
I decided to seek out the opinions of two lovely Australian picture book authors I met through #pblitchat on Twitter. Kathryn Apel is the author of picture book This is the Mud and Karen Collum is the author of several picture books including one due out this September titled Samuel’s Kisses. I regard them both as being great sources of knowledge on all things PB related. They both gave me some great advice on writing a PB query. Here are the main points they made:
– Capture the heart and tone of your story in the query.
– Use small section of text from your book.
– Keep it short and sweet, one to two paragraphs is enough.
– Give the whole story in a nutshell, including the ending.
Armed with this great advice I shaped my query to match more with the tone of my story, with some little excerpts from the text weaved into it.
My query still needs some polishing so I’ve submitted it to the Query Kick-Around on YA Lit Chat (which also accomodates other types of kidlit, including picture books) and hopefully I’ll receive some helpful critique from some of the other members there.
Next step: Sending the queries to publishers here in Australia. I’ve got a list of a few of the publishers currently accepting unsolicited manuscripts for picture books, so hopefully one of them will love my story enough to publish it.
Since I wrote this post a few sites/blogs have popped up with some helpful information on writing picture book queries, so I thought it might be helpful to update this post with some links.
Mary Kole on kidlit.com made a post specifically on how to write a picture book query: Picture Book Queries
The Query Shark bites into a picture book query: Query Shark #178
Looking for PB query critiques? The Write on Con forums have a section specifically dedicated to critiquing PB queries. Registration is free at the time of this post and it’s a site well worth joining if you’re a kidlit writer: Write on Con
Here is a helpful webinar video from Write on Con with Emma Walton Hamilton (aka The Query Whisperer): Picture Book Query Letters.
Another great resource that’s cropped up in the last few years is the 12 x 12 Picture Book Writing Challenge. As well as providing great resources on picture book queries, you also get access to webinars from industry professionals that sometimes include helpful information on crafting picture book queries and even sometimes opportunities to have your query critiqued by a professional (such as the fabulous Emma Walton Hamilton). There is also access to a query critique forum where you can receive critique from fellow (often experienced) PB writers on your picture book query. While it does cost to join 12 x 12, it is a worthwhile investment for picture book writers who are serious about submitting to agents and editors. 12 x 12 is open to new members from about mid-January through to the end of February.
UPDATE (Feb 2016):
I’ve recently come across a post on picture book query writing from agent Maria Vicente of P.S. Literary Agency. She offers three great tips specific to picture book queries. You can find the post here: How to Query a Picture Book.
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26 thoughts on “Writing a Picture Book Query”
Glad it helped, Jo. Looking forward to hearing great news from you soon! Jumping… for joy. 🙂
thans for great sharing
@Kat *fingers crossed* 🙂
How exciting! I’ll keep everything crossed for you – hope you find your keen publisher soon!
Thanks Jay, I hope so too!
Best to you. I’m in the process of putting one up too so appreciate the helpful hints – never too many of those.
hope to see our books sharing the same rack
Love from the Moon
Thank-you Moon. Good luck to you with your picture book too. It can be a daunting process. I know personally it can be hard to find information on writing queries specifically for picture books, so I’m glad I was able to pass on some helpful hints.
How exciting for you! Well done on putting your work out there and putting so much thought into the process. Sounds like you’re on a winner to me. Look forward to hearing more good news soon!
Thanks Karen! Your advice really helped me out. I’ve just finished polishing my query from the critiques I’ve been getting and I think I’m finally at the point where I’m happy with it. I have a good list of publishers now too. Hopefully someone will like it!
I heard a tip regarding how to summarize a pb into three sentences. Tell the beginning, the middle, and the ending, one for each sentence. PB summarized. Ta-da!
Great tip Christie! Thanks for sharing it.
Just watched your Smory with my 8 y.o. How adorable! We enjoyed the entire story, and of course, the last line is priceless! Best wishes!
I’m so glad you both enjoyed it! Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.
Thank you for writing such an informative post. I’ve been looking all over on how to write a query for picture books! This will be very helpful! Good luck with your book! 🙂
You’re welcome! And thank you! Back when I wrote this I had been trying to find posts on writing picture book queries without much luck. I’m lucky to know a couple of published PB authors I could ask for advice and was only too happy to share with others who might be seeking tips on writing a PB query, since there is so little information out there on this topic. I’m glad you found it helpful.
I know this posted long ago, but I just found it. It’s been very helpful. Thank you so much.
You’re welcome! I’m so glad it was helpful to you.
Thanks for the great roundup of tips and links. Great info!
No problem, Sylvia. Good luck with your query writing!
Thanks for your post. Am working on my pb query for my 61 word manuscript and was at a bit of a loss. Now I have some firm ideas.
It’s really hard finding posts on writing picture book queries, I’m glad I could help. Good luck with querying your PB!
The two links in the following portion of your article are not working. : (
“Sourcing Blogs for Query Writing Tips
I checked out a few picture book queries kidlit agent Mary Kole had commented upon on her blog during a query competition she held a while back to get some ideas. One here. And another here.”
Thanks for letting me know! She must have taken down those posts on her website. I’ll update my post.